MrRandomist's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Skating animation]

YOU DIDNT FINISH IT

i dont know how this is a music video theres no sound?
you only coloured in one thing, purple. the rest of the flash is in black and white with poorly drawn lines....keep working and try to colour it in and work more into the detail. good premises but poor execution. a better story would be nice.

TheCrackedVision responds:

yeah sorry i was just coming up with it at 3 in the morning
and this is my first 1

[King Chris]

lolz that was weird

the ass was funny. sparkly clean :D
and i liked the cuiriousity in the humour well done there.
you need to work on the layout of the flash and the art itself was sloppy!

RKrazy responds:

haha thanks.

yaaaaa...the backgrounds are really, REALLY lazy XD

I wanted to get it done fast, so I made the BG's in a couple of minutes
and yes, my animation needs improving.

this is my only defense, But I did this all on the weekend XD

the next one (yes...theres a next one XD) we're actually planning it out more. I guess you could say this flash was to see if anyone would actually notice it.
and on the bonus side, We got Tomamoto to do some voice acting! Wheeee!

anyways, thanks again for the review :3 I appreciate it alot

[EVIL Co. Hiring Day]

needs more work.

pros:
good humor
good story
good voice acting but PLEASE get a BETTER mic

cons:
art, you need to do your own art! google the pixel tool if you wish to create your own art in pixels.
do not ever use bitmaps from google image EVER
some sound effects from websites would be handy instead of using your own voice

good start, you just need to work on art and polish ;)

Kooma responds:

Hmm, I'd put a little thought into making pixel art for the desk and whatnot. Maybe I could make use of it in new material. Thanks for the idea.

[A very random cowboy]

pretty meh all around

you need to work on your art more, its quite all over the place, i did like the birds nest at the end that was well drawn.
may i suggest using layers, it looks as if it was all stuffed on one layer.
also may i suggest using black overlay on the bit hiding the stuff the viewer doesnt want to see, for a better viewing experience, please.
voice work felt tedious, maybe you could find one on the newgrounds forums.

kayorent responds:

Thanks for reviewing, this is pretty much just to show my youtube subs the school project that was keeping me from posting any videos.

-Dright

[[RD10] Dancin' ROBOT]

really awesome

this is really cool but it would be great if your robot could do more tricks :P
i suggest a back and possibly a front flip
next robot day?

Punisher responds:

he is already training for it.

[GRIM art collab]

Great Collab!

well done, to everyone in this collab, there are some nice pics in the collab and i really liked the music, although the only thing that brought it down from a 10 was that its just pics theres now extras, mini-games or small cartoons/animation besides the intro.
9/10 and 5/5

acedareaper responds:

thank you for your review, were currently trying to fit the extras the people worked hard on in.