MrRandomist's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[King Chris]

lolz that was weird

the ass was funny. sparkly clean :D
and i liked the cuiriousity in the humour well done there.
you need to work on the layout of the flash and the art itself was sloppy!

RKrazy responds:

haha thanks.

yaaaaa...the backgrounds are really, REALLY lazy XD

I wanted to get it done fast, so I made the BG's in a couple of minutes
and yes, my animation needs improving.

this is my only defense, But I did this all on the weekend XD

the next one (yes...theres a next one XD) we're actually planning it out more. I guess you could say this flash was to see if anyone would actually notice it.
and on the bonus side, We got Tomamoto to do some voice acting! Wheeee!

anyways, thanks again for the review :3 I appreciate it alot

[EVIL Co. Hiring Day]

needs more work.

pros:
good humor
good story
good voice acting but PLEASE get a BETTER mic

cons:
art, you need to do your own art! google the pixel tool if you wish to create your own art in pixels.
do not ever use bitmaps from google image EVER
some sound effects from websites would be handy instead of using your own voice

good start, you just need to work on art and polish ;)

Kooma responds:

Hmm, I'd put a little thought into making pixel art for the desk and whatnot. Maybe I could make use of it in new material. Thanks for the idea.

[Fishes in a bowl]

your getting better!

pros:
nice art, your definitely getting better in those areas.

cons:
no sounds or music
no smoothness in the animation part
just a tiny loop, nothing happens no story, try looping it up maybe
no pre-loader, even though its a tiny flash.

[A very random cowboy]

pretty meh all around

you need to work on your art more, its quite all over the place, i did like the birds nest at the end that was well drawn.
may i suggest using layers, it looks as if it was all stuffed on one layer.
also may i suggest using black overlay on the bit hiding the stuff the viewer doesnt want to see, for a better viewing experience, please.
voice work felt tedious, maybe you could find one on the newgrounds forums.

kayorent responds:

Thanks for reviewing, this is pretty much just to show my youtube subs the school project that was keeping me from posting any videos.

-Dright

[Luigi's Wonderland]

dancing the night away

art was fantastic and flowed nicely, only criticism was you need to go over the art and keep refining it, because you could definitely make a top of week ect with the comedy value and and flow.
music was satisfying and definitely suitable and enjoyable so props.
so props and well done!

[Adventureo Brothers]

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!

lol, the extended period of falling was hilarious, great work just keep at the animation and keep working on it. keep it up!

[Twilight : Hairy Moon]

Loved It

Really good use of humor and the lip syncing and sound was great!
Your art is also getting really good keep it up and im glad your getting somewhere!

[[RD10] Dancin' ROBOT]

really awesome

this is really cool but it would be great if your robot could do more tricks :P
i suggest a back and possibly a front flip
next robot day?

Punisher responds:

he is already training for it.

[The Sketch Collab 2010]

awesome

This was great to watch and awesome pacing, nice to see it out on the portal

[2nd attempt in claymation]

well done

i love claymation! and this was awesome well done!