MrRandomist's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Egito Secrets DEMO]

broken

your game is broken, after the pre-loader starts up and loads, when you press play the screen is white and nothing is there....

[Switchman 2]

fun

quite enjoyed the game and i really liked the hand drawn colours, although it did have slight degree of busyness, and clashed with the rest of the game.
maybe some more upbeat music would have been nice while playing and maybe give the player more time with the game.
as i said its fun but could use more finishing touches and tweaks to make it perfect.

[Ultimate Crapventure]

its ok

this is definitely one of the better games factory 2 games ive seen lately, i do agree that it does, seem to hamper the experience with slight lag, you also have problems with random enemies disappearing into the abyss, i suggest in the future to use, flash for making flash games, no games factory :)
the art also needs improvement, it seems to be lacking and the black and white dont seem to engage the viewer too well. so you've got room for improvement.
i suggest you collaborate with someone next time on the art while you work your way through the coding and design....

[Pops Balloonn Adventure]

the regular show

its cool the show is popular and people are taking recognition, of many people favorite character but not in this way. they're all bitmaps and very annoy reoccurring voice over that are bad in quality, i suggest you create something more original and vector art based, if you where to create a parody or something that would be cool, but please dont cut out images from the show and stick it on, its poor and choppy.

DNA117 responds:

I did not want to use bitmaps for my sprites. I did everything in Illustrator, and then realized that the Game Factory 2 does not support vector based images. As for copying images from the show, Yes I used reference pictures, but I did not copy and paste art.

[The Kindness of Strangers]

cool

the maze was cool and the coding was excellent.
but at the end of the day, i didnt feel a connection as to why i was playing the game, the only thing that kept me going was the difficulty of the maze and never being able to finish or find the end, oh well.
you should really do something with the engine and make a really fun and compelling game with it, because what you have atm is cool, but i didnt want to see your holiday pictures, but i wouldnt mind seeing a cool colourful vector background. i do hope you make something good one day. good luck.

[Virtua Breakout]

alright

the 3D is excellent, i have no idea on how to do 3d in flash but hey still cool non the less. although blocky ALOT when animating it.
on the terms of actual gameplay, its pretty non-existent in terms of fun, i mean theres power-ups and other bits and pieces, but theres nothing to really drag you in and play for half an hour....i guess the genre/game just isnt for me but i would really like your art to be aplied better in terms of coding and gameplay, because art isnt everything in a game.

[Spitfire 1940]

nice

quite enjoyed the game, the graphics where amazing!
these types of games are appealing to me, thats why i rated it so high, but accually flying of controlling the squadron would be cool instead of just seeing a setout animation of who has the most planes....and who will get will....it would be nice to see some actual gameplay as mentioned above. good effort and itll keep me playing for awhile!

[A Leap Of Faith!]

one of the better games ive seen today!

lately games have been quite poor on the portal....this was accually quite fun a interesting the concept was great, and it was easy to just pick up and play i knew exactly what to do right from the start, although the concept of removing blocks multiple colours was cool it should have been explored more...i dont know how it just feels that way.
i got up to level 4 i think and it just got overly difficult too fast, to me.

keep up the good work!

Epic428 responds:

I'm sorry the game got overly difficult for you in such a fast amount of time. Could you elaborate on what it was that caused this? If it was the jumping, please know that we are planning on implementing a new system for jumping that should ease things and make this game much more enjoyable.

We appreciate your feedback very much! Thanks!

[Epic Work Machine DemoV.2]

its great and all

Pros:
the coding is pretty good, you should really work on the engine, although nowa days your not sure if its your coding

Cons:
the art really needs work, you should consider finding an artist to help you, team work collaboration is always great.
as for the engine, it definitely needs work. please dont keep submitting your alphas.

NoFatAsiansPlz responds:

Don't you worry looking back at what everybody says about this... I improve it a lot! Thanks for the pros and cons, it helped me a lot

[Eskimo River Rush]

favourite game of the jam!

props to your team, love it, seems really polished for 72 hours of work, and the gameplay was brilliant.

molkman responds:

I love you. :)